maybe this is your first submitted flash....
but dont act like this is your first flash. Its obvioulsy not. it wasnt horrible, and it was a funny concept, but it definately wasnt great.
Er...my first flash, I meant first flash "Movie"
I made a stickman waving first....but that doesn't count as a movie.
i enjoyed the shit out of this. lol. spingo thot u were talking about urself. make more cynical badass shitty things like this man, and if you ever need any sound tr5acks im starting to post my techno experimental , so if you ever wander from the charlie brown style im down fo whateva
i really wanna vote 0 and bet blam points
but i wont. cus it doesnt deserve 0. wasnt great wasnt the worst thing ever. prolly deserves blam, but if you made it longer and gave it a point i think you could get a solid 6. And yah, a better soundtrack would be nice.
it has to be your taste, but i liked the game. the level up screen was especially nice, and how you selected the part. overall i enjoyed it.
very appealing to the eyes
it was a little bit laggy but thats probably my shitty computers fault. the guy moved a little slow for my taste, and theres not that many options. kind of a same old same old, but definately looks really good, and i enjoy the explosions and shit. nice job.
i really enjoy the sound
your style is really cool, but there are some parts of the song you cant even hear cus its peaking. the change at 1:20 is really sick. and theres just enough change throughout the song. you might want to add some other insturments, and add some crazy cymbal work during the breakdown area.
I really enjoyed this. im not sure if your going for an industrial sound in the bass synth or if the levels are just peaking, but either way it sounds good. the whole song, especially the dynamics are freaking sick. I wish there was more stuff like this being made. I think if you added some really bassy kick drum it could add, and the drum track is a little lacking, but i like simplicity of it also. idk its hard to decide, it really depens. it coul also be the shitty heaphones im using. This is way more original than most of the crap out there. I just started working with beats (techno trance stuff) using ableton, and compared to any of the stuff ive made this is great. i would most definately be proud. if you have any other stuff youd like to bounce around my email is email@example.com, and if youd be interested in some collab projects, that would be sick. something a little bit different after the bridge would be cool too, although its pretty much standard format to repeat after the bridge i think a little variation is cool sometimes. and definately asolid finish, but i know how ending a techno song go's. theres always something to improve. and what program do you use?
Really thanks, I apreciate it, I made this song cause I have a friend who likes some of my songs, I showed him "Universal explosion" and he told me "I liked it more the techno and hip hop songs you did before", so I wanted to make a good one, while I was making this one I forgot to check the window out and it started again without me noticing so I figured it loops well =), I'm surely adding you, the distortion and all that shit on the middle is not only because of your headphones, the synth is really exesivelly... hmm... idk... it "Overloads" the song, but with a good headphones it can sound a little better, idk.
I used Fruity Loops Studio 8, but a Demo that doesnt allow me to modify it once I close fl so... it's made continous and if we can do a collab that's cool too =) really thanks for the review.
PS: I only used 2 variations of the same synth the whole song, modifying the "Short Synth - Trance" synth =) (it's also the bass).
needs to come in stronger
in the beginning i could almost here like lincoln park vocals going over the top, it kind of got a little more poppy after that tho, and no real forceful entry, which you really need. MORE DYNAMICS. but other than that nice job mate.
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